There are no interactions between the two of them between the two events and no internal thoughts given to the reader. When she arrives he's already decided to treat her like a mate, she is his mate. He then hires her to cook him a meal, her not knowing it's him until she arrives. Natalia throws Logan out of her restaurant, or at least tells him he can't eat. Let me lay it out this way, despite being 130 pages long, there is nothing in the book beyond what is in the blurb, almost literally. ![]() ![]() ![]() So, the mechanical writing is fine and I thought the outline of an interesting story was too, but.BUT at one point, in the beginning, I flipped back and forwards between pages and even came to the internet to ensure I had an up to date copy, because I was sure I was missing a chapter or two (or five).
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